Wednesday, September 15, 2010

Lennie's percpective,
    Day102: George wont let me keep the mouse.Sometimes he can be so mean but I dont mind because I know he means no harm. But it still aint very nice he threw that mouse in the river. I mean I am kinda plaintive. He said it smelled but I aint think it smelled that bad. It was kinda like a stinky sock you know it stinks but you still wear it. Oh boy I cant wait for thoose beans George is cooking, still wish I had some ketchup though.

    Day103: We arrived at the new job... and I hate it. I want to leave now. The bosses son aint no good person he has a problem with me and made some derogatory statements, he is so pugnacious but I aint done nothing to him! Im scarred I need something soft I wish I had that mouse. Oh wait its time to go work this is a chance to make George happy. And maybe I will find another mouse.

    Day104: Oh my god George says I can have one of Slim's puppies. I am recumbent position outside in the dirt. I cant wait to rub my fingers through his soft fur! And he wont smell like stinky socks because I will clean him so George wont through him in a river. Or drown him like Slim did with some of his puppies. Oh boy I am so excited George said I couldn't take him up stairs but maybe I could sneak him up...

2 comments:

  1. I like your post alot. You really got Lennie's perspective. You added a bunch of details. And I liked the way you used the vocabulary words. The way you compared the mouse to a stinky old sock was very creative. You really sounded like you were Lennie.

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  2. Eli G commenting on Journal Entry
    Very nice. You need more accent especially when your doing Lennie. I like how you do the events in chronological order. It's good that you have, ex day104. You did good overall!
    Eli G

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